hmm
Well, the one cartoon you had was funny but it was SOO frigging slow! You should really fix that >.< And this cartoon has been out for a while, but you still havent gotten the rest of the scenes. You really should have more than one before putting it up... Hurry and finish, I want to see the rest!
Also at the screaming part he screams loud as hell! you should fix that too -_-;;