Sorry, but, is this your first flash?
Okay, the hallway was rail-roaded to go straight forward, that's fine. The first room was okay, I like the diary thing. The second room ruined it. You give a tiny button to click and about a quarter of a second to click it. I went through a second time, clicked immediately as it came up and the button went black and didn't do what it was supposed to. If you didn't finish the flash, then don't post it yet. Last note, the "quiet" sounds such as background music and breathing, were loud.