its very detailed but I know I could be more detailed than the book

Some stuff was misspelled and there were a few problems with punctuation and capitalization.

Pet peeve of mine.

For example, you spelled apocalypse, "appocalypse."

There's only one "p."

It was little stuff like that. But I really liked it. It was funny, and it reminded me of an old-timey educational video as well, which added to the funnyness.

As others have said, add some audio perhaps, and also pause it after each scene comes up and only have it continue after the viewer pushes a "Next" button or something like that... and it will be PERFECT.

Very good work. Few improvements to be made.

If it was like those old fashioned educational movies with the black and grey moviestyle ,if you know what im talking about, this would be very good. Other than that it was humorous and quite informative. Hope to see more.

Add a voice over and a "Next slide" button and it'll be gold. As is, needs a "next slide" button for those of us who can't read that fast.
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And some more "advice" wouldn't hurt. You know, "what to do when you see a zombie," "places you shouldn't go to when fleeing from the hordes of the living dead," "things you might want to do but will probably wind up getting you killed." Honestly, you could probably do a "Zombie Survival Series" if you wanted.
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Yes, I like quotation marks.

the only complaint i have about it is the cracks at will smith, as those technically weren't zombies...have you read the Zombie survival guide? ironically enough its sitting on my coffee table right now...zombies don't have advanced thoughts, but the ones in i am legend began to plot against him. in any case, the only other problem i had with it was the grammar and spelling. neither of which were too bad, but noticeable to a person that spoke english first. i don't know if english is your first language or not, a lot of people on here are from europe, its hard to tell. anyway, you did a good job with it, i agree that it needs music and a voiceover...but still....good job.