It was passable for beginner's work I guess
Odd how the video became totally direction less after the initial attack on what I assume was some sort of evil base of operations. After that idk who's who or anything
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ok again this is second animation and not very good but good news is the 3rd is finished and the 4th tom is almost complete. the 4th tom even has a play button. so plz comment and tell me whats bad and good k thx
Same problems with the first one.
Don't rush and read every review thoroughly, man. It still has the mediocre plot and sound effects and the usual 'okay but horrible' fight scenes. Don't use white as a background, ever.
IT NEEDS BETTER ANIMATION
I like that there seems to be a narrative (storyline)? And I like the homemade/mouthmade sound effects.
But obviously the animation needs a lot of work. I can see where the floor meets the wall THROUGH their heads, is just one of many examples of crap animation...
Keep working at it! Thanks for submitting.