An improvement!
Many people may wonder how this can possibly be an improvement. Take a look at the other films done by this hack. At least Strawberry clock did not give us a film with Bob Sagot flying around in tights like that hornball madflash did. This one was almost funny. Almost. Since telling you to drop dead or go away does not seem to work I will give you some advice....FIRST: Your animation is not bad but your drawing stinks. Perhaps you know someone who can draw pics for you then you can animate their drawings. SECOND: If everybody you know draws like you then you might wanna try cutouts. Find actual pics, like for instance if you were going to do a parody of the pepsi girl, download or scan a pic of her and animate it in flash! You know how to animate and you are slowly learning humor. Maybe in a few years you might be good! You are already better than Madflash!