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Yea great animation and all, but seriously, couldn't you come up with a different ending than just stealing Cowboy Bebop almost scene for scene? If you genuinely have never seen cowboy bebop, watch the last episode. You remade it with ghouls and some evil king.... wonderful. And that cliche jump-in-the-air-clang-of-swords-one-guy-collapses ending is so played out. Use your talent to be original next time
Umm, learn to sword fight.
The movie was over dramatasised, but that wasn't bad.
The main characther was a screw loose of a cannon. But that wasn't the bad part.
You don't know how to sword fight, and this showed. . . Too much rode on this, and no one knew how to fight beyond a half an ass. . . Sorry, but that made this movie very bad. . .
'cmon
it's not that goood..
not to be 1st...
Anime
Welll... that was very anime... to the point of obscenity! It took all the most horridly chliche and stupid concepts anime has, and focused on them... and lets not forget to make it all christian (yet completely different from any christian followship) because any good anime geek knows that its so "foreign and cool" (to the japanese that is).
Yes its nice, if you havent been exposed to it to the point of obscenity, good artistic skills but here are things to avoid:
1. both parties using the same attack in the most climatic point of battle, where only they are showen, with different color backgrounds of moving lines.. resulting in a flash of light when they come close, afterwards they both stand there for 5 seconds, then the bad guy falls into peices or the bad guy says something like "impossible" and then falls into peices or the bag guy trying to move and falls into peices
2. a hero that is obnoxiously YOUNG, too young to be any good in what he does, yet he is, he is also extremely effiminate, despite the fact that he wields a sword three times his weight (yours was decent, it was only slightly larger then him) which should make him look more like arnold rather then how he looks like.
3. the hero cries dearly for killing his mind controlled friends/his friends who are bound by duty to serve the bad guy/blah. yet kills them 2 seconds into the battle rather then knocking then down or inflicting a non lethal wound (for example, rather then cut them in half, cut their leg and throw them something to stop the bleeding with)
4. those really annoying smirks they have
5. red/purple/whatever eyes for the hero, and impossible hair colors (the magician i understand)
6. Any swordsman with front hair bangs long enough to reach his chin that doesnt tie them back so they dont get in his eyes (trust me, that sucks, especially during combat)
7. Everything bearing a cross, even the POPE doesnt have that many crosses, seriously, every sword, helmet, shield, cape, bow, building, whatever has a cross on it. I understand you think christianity is all "cool", yea its the in thing, but anyone would go crazy that way...
8. other
... oh the excessive use of topless women is NOT a bad thing though, thats one of the better parts of anime.. warriors would benefit from a nice suit of armour though.
For starters the art wasn't very good, The voice acting was very disapointing, the story is not very easy to understand, the fight scenes were... well short, and why were all the females in this animation nude? I'll be nice and give you a whole star though... because I understand that maybe you don't have the best tools to work with. I don't mean to be an ass but at least work on your art a bit.