How cute...
Ha ha ha, funny comentary. It was a lovely bit to read. Well done, i'm proud.
How cute...
Ha ha ha, funny comentary. It was a lovely bit to read. Well done, i'm proud.
Meh... possibly more action?
Well done and all lil man, but perhaps a lot more action can bring up your score. Your linguistic skills are rather.... low. So maybe work on these and you may have a better flash.
Longer would also bring good tidings to your flash.