Nice
I have to say i'm enjoying your series alot, i do have a few issues with this chapter though, when bat first starts the fight he has trouble beating one of those knights and then gets pwn'd by 3 of them, then when the war scene breaks out he beats up about 4 in one hit which doesn't make much sense... and apart from that i didn't quite get where the random bolts of lightning where coming from if it was from louis that makes sense, if it was just lightning, it should of been hitting the knights as they were taller and fully clad in armour... so the lightning would of aimed for them.... despite the erm... criticism i still enjoyed it emensly :)