not bad
it was cool, a little short, but this one was pretty cool while it lasted.
Reviews for "the last tonberry"
Did I miss something?
Your style is great and I loved the animation... but it feel that this is lacking in the plot department. If the veiwer isn't familar with Final Fantasy, they may not get anything at all out of it. Points for the cuteness factor, though.
jultomten responds:
aaw, thanks alot, you see, this was just something i did too get my brain working cause it was in some kind of freeze mode. And after a few frames i thought that it would be a good possibilty to practice fbf ...anyways, thanks again, now back to the makin of my zelda flash... have been working for almost a week and haave only made like 1 minute film lol :P
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You must admit that Tonberries look like a merger of Yoda and a hedgehog... That is not a bad thing by the way, it is just something interesting to see. This particular Tonberry looks like he could carry a small series himself, his actions, while minimal, have definate potential. I could see several episodes revolving around him, and not just on his eventual demise. If that is what you wanted to do, by the way, at least give some sort of backstory for the character, perhaps let us see his dying race dwindling down, or something similar to it. I guess I see something really interesting in this and it would be great if you were to continue on with it, good luck.
Ryan
Really short.
There could have been SO MUCH MORE to it... but there wasn't. Shoot for a longer flash next time. The sound was good though... at least for the background music.
Sound is good... just the story itself...
I like the color key and the music. They blend in well with the background.
Did you create key frames for every movement?
The concept of the movie is good, but it's just too short. There isn't enough content to make watching it worthwhile. Create a basic story.
Keepy trying. Good luck on your next movie!