Very nice T.T
That was very touching, I like it a lot, very cute at the end, it has a wonderful message and is just cute overall. Love will prevail ^.^
Reviews for "Do Us Part"
It was very brave of you..
Very brave of you to submit this flash, it is a sensitive area I understand, but the flash itself was very well done. The ending kinda' made my eyes well up because I know a couple who went through that. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
moved me to tears...
truly tragic...
she tries pills ...empty...
she tries razor blade .... it breaks on her arm not even leaving a scratch....
she tries jumping and wakes up in her bed
if you got this idea from a friend or yourself i feel your pain i've gone down that path a couple times myself and wish you the best of luck,
~Kevin~
Surreal and connected
you created a fine flash- use of music was perfect as well as maintaining a sense of direction to the story... each act more desperate than the next. My only beef is that you had to explain the razorblade event; even I was a bit confused as to how that happened... the sound wasn't too much of a clue and I was more focused on her face than the sound. Granted though a "ghostly wedding ring" would have killed the suspense you were maintining... tricky section that might need a bit more work to lessen the confusion On a personal level it has touched me like many others. Sadly some people care less for emotions and thats really their problem, not yours so don't sweat it. Again you did a great job and look forward to more work from you. By the by I emailed this link to a few friends who were equally impressed.
peace-
Great
This was a pretty good flash. Keep it up.