Cool
I remember reading about this in the Alphas. It was ok but I agree you should have credited Macone with the guns so you don't get flamed and you could make the graphics better but other than that it was ok, I bet the next one will be really good.
Not bad
Was a bit short though and clearly needs work. Overall, not a bad job. (Btw, you may want to give credit for those weapon .flas to the good people at ammu-nation.de.tf)
I was going to be nice, but...
Macone drew those guns, you didn't even credit him for it, you jackass. How could you claim someone elses art when your art sucks in the first place. I know you're not Macone, he doesn't draw like shit. You need to credit people dude.
Listen to me and listen to me now. I DID NOT STEAL THOSE WEAPONS! That is the SECOND time someone said that, from this movie and the trailer. I amit not "making" them. I found a gun online, traced it, and recolored, made it into a cartoon gun. I did not STEAL anything, and no art in this is shit ok! a lot of hard work was put into this so enough griping you moron. ?Don't tell me what I did or didn't do. I know what I did, and those guns are not "Macones"...
good start
i saw when you entered the trailer a few weeks back. you still have the problem at the start, too many text boxes. You should try and get some voice overs for that and a little more action in shots like that. I haven't played more than a demo of the first game so i don't know about how your doing on story lines but keep up the good work and think about red faction 2 stuff like if you make a game.
not bad
not bad my friend, kudos to you a good animation. Did have a few problems tho, first (and things like this bother me the most) hanger is spelled with an A "hangar". You also really need to finish it and submit it as a single animation, maybe even turn it into a game where the to be continues was. Thatd be pretty sweet to get some monster action in there too or something lol. Not quite sure it yet deserves a 3.5 tho, not till its finished at least.