U GOTTA MAKE THIS INTO A BOOK
GREAT STORYLINE
I THINK U WILL MAKE A GOOD WRITER ..... MAKING GREAT HORROR NOVELS
FOR KIDS AND OLDER PEOPLE TO READ
IF THIS WAS A BOOK... I WILL BUY IT FROM U
GOOD LUCK ON YOUR BOOK
U GOTTA MAKE THIS INTO A BOOK
GREAT STORYLINE
I THINK U WILL MAKE A GOOD WRITER ..... MAKING GREAT HORROR NOVELS
FOR KIDS AND OLDER PEOPLE TO READ
IF THIS WAS A BOOK... I WILL BUY IT FROM U
GOOD LUCK ON YOUR BOOK
wonderfull
it was perfect it makes me cry it was A WONDERFULL story
Excellent.
I think this is a well thought out story. absolutely fantastic!
I love the story......
....but it was so sad. I bet only TRUE goths would find that not disturbing. I feel sorry for the little girl.
WOW
That was so dark, but it was good though