wow
was awesome!
the poor little girl...
BUT the "please" part sounded kreepy
"at the stroke of midnight or perhaps a few seconds .."
^^ i found that kkinda funny
AWESOME STORY MY FREND!
Reviews for "The Little Girl"
wonderful
great work. just beautiful. i loved the whole thing... buts its fortunate for me that i didnt read your description of it in the authors comments >_< they would have been major spoilers, upseting me much. but great, great work.
Well done....
That was very creepy, sort of Tim Burton-Esque, while at the same time original.
Bravo!
It's sad to think that the parents had another child when they didn't even take care of the first one. It's also sad, now that I think of it, that the little girl was never truly loved even after she leaves.
This was demonically depressing and tugged at my heart strings.
I rated violence a five and even though there was mass genocide in this story no gory details were involved and it left it up to my imagination.
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That was an ingenious piece! Keep up the good work...