Reviews for Little Fighter Renegade I

[Jonkenden]

Decent attempt but you need quite some work

I seen worse i say, you could improve it alot by increasing the amount of frames so it becomes smoother. Right now it`s jerky and feels strange to watch, sprites being sprites are decent graphics but why did you use sprites and then custom made backgrounds?

It looks bad when combined unless you are particulary skilled at making your own things, i`d suggest sticking with sprite and sprite backgrounds rather than mixing for now. The fight scenes themselves where very short so they became rather uninteresting, you need some improvements there as well.

Keep working on it

[V-Avon]

Grammer is bad.

Work on the grammer. Punctuation. Your backrounds need work. The fight was too fast.

[Deathazre]

Grammer. Welcome to america.

The transition effect was decent, you storyline seems to go along with the typical, what made me stop the movie was grammar. 'John didnt saw it very well...' one example of many. It was a little hard to read, as well. Nice try tho. Keep it up.

[Vortex-19]

needs fixing

The text is too fast...and the grammer is horrible.
Other then that, It's okay, I suppose, but I couldn't read what was happening.

[Paper-Man]

Needs work

To have a large plot in your head and to work on the whole thing as one big production seems to be a lot to ask of Flash artists. What was good about this was the action, where you seem to have promise. The plot was advanced by quick disappearing text, and I need to strongly suggest some voice acting or atleast word balloons to polish your text. Also, let more happen in your movies. I'm not necessarily saying make them unnaturally long. I mean make the most of the Flash's time. Good luck on the rest of the series.