thats a very good effort
you are definatly a talented artist, and you have obviously put a lot of effort into this. completely as constructive criticism here: may be you should get someone to add their ideas for jokes and stuff, the way you animate your characters and stuff is fucking ace, and the situations are well funny, but I think having someone elses imput into maybe a few one liners and jokes would really make your work legendary!!!
Still your work is most definatly a cut above the rest and I'll be keeping an eye out for future posts.