Bleh, I've seen better!!
Sure the graphics were good, but the music wasnt very original and it played through the whole thing. It was short, and had very little story. What was up with the monster in the end???
Reviews for "No Man's Land Flash Anime"
7 seas? pirates?
sometimes i wonder why great animators like you are doing on newgrounds,well,this was well animated but i just didnt like it
Long and Pointless
Sory-line was terrible. Very random ending. Lots of scences were much longer than they should have been. Not impressed.
Alot to think about
Ok... hmmm this same story plot never stops, and most of all THE JOKES. This is probably the obviouse beginning to end. First thing that happens a guy (s) character ( mostly the main character) is introduced, then the character is some how tied into a group of girls which may turn up as heroines, then one of the girls end up hidding her true feelings for the main character and always end up doing something wrong. As it turns out.. one of the other girl(s) have feelings for the main character too which would lead to more up coming events. After that gets all sorted out the main character and the one thats falling in love with him/her start getting supported by the secondery characters so they would be together. Then in the end all sorts of lovey dovey stuff happens with all the characters....
As for the jokes though.. hmm lets see... something like what your flash demonstrated, The main character will always end up saying or doing something that would sound or look like sexual humor or love or something. It looks like to me. That this flash that could've been worked on better is showing that this manga story plot your ADVERTISING is none other then COPYING Ken Akamatsu style. It seems like the exact samething but instead this one is a very sad clich'e. And yeah i wouldn't be saying this if i didnt know that much about story's, anime, and manga. appearently i do. So please dont go in that direction, people who are going to recognize this same plot will.. AND I ASSURE YOU, WILL look down upon it. you just revealed to much information about this series. Other then that.. the other guy was right. I rather watch that other flash you made. Its amazing how this type of anime built in with this story plot catches my eye... I'm usually a sucker for these kind've things.
In the end, .. the song was nice.
loops, loops, loops!
Too many loops buddy! The problem with using loops this way is that it's very similar to music, in that if you create a musical loops every 4 count, you've effectively lost your audiences attention because all they're doing now is focusing on when there will be change. It seems that you've created loop cycles that run on 4 to 8 frames... far too close to be having such a loop in almost every animated aspect of this piece. As was stated already, great art, poor execution. Keep working on it... cause I know this is just a pilot!