Great!
Your artistry on the the models was great, they had such striking resemblances. The only problems i had were that a Terminator would die from one stab in its back, there was no reason behind the war (I know that they are all fighting each other to become the supreme race.. sorta), but maybe if you attempted to have a plot it would be better, the last problem i had was that you didn't show a good array of models that would be in a real Warhammer 40k battle (they make use of dreadnoughts, scouts, tanks, psychers, etc.).