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Reviews for "Star Crap Episode3 (1/2)"

cool

very nice animation. i know im no star wars fan, but this animation was awesome. i liked this one a lot, and now im going to check out the 2nd half to it.

Meh.

It was alright I guess. OK so really the only part that was funny was the Count Dooku/Black Knight thing. I suppose the rest just wasn't my kind of humor. Not enough wit really.

damn, i fall asleep

c'mon, it is horribly boring, yeah, it is.

Watching sitcoms all day make you like this, believe me.

keep going, maybe you will do something someday.

Monty Pithon fan aren't we?

Yeah it's totally like the black Knight

-Coward fight me!
-yeah what are you going to do bleed on me?!

Well yeah i really liked it! lol its a good flash with better graphics than i expected and well i don't care if you took some things from monty i love it anyway lol ! Nice Work!

Read this, ill give you tips and credit!

Alright, were to beging. the good? Alright the good :) I really like your graphics even though they weren't "Little Foot" good, they were original so i really like that. Your sound, was nice and clear, plus i really like the backround music. (if u can give a site to get those same soudns cause im working on a StarWars spof myself) OH yeah, and the person who did the voice for Padmé WOW! really good. Interms of humor. a little week but i like the part with Dook. HAH, that made me laugh lol. Really good for a what seems to be a first attemt.

Now the bad :( hate to do add this but how else are you gonna get better. So for Humor, umm.... try something more intellgent perhaps. Graphics, it would be just making alittle sharper i guess, but i like em.

The actually content now.... what was up with that intro, lon long long ZzZzZz, not nessesary. Come up with something less predictable and more pazzazy lol. That intro, with the text... yeah i've seen so many people do that same thing, and i hate it, if your gonna make fun of it, don't do it the same or just don't put it at all. Grievous, Grievous, Grievous, what was up with the Afro.... i know he has a Jamaican voice, but still not that funny really. And that Mountain Dew! Omg that wasn't funny, it was really out there, and not in a funny way!

I think thats about all, and i hope you read this. I'm not trying to make myself sound superrior to you, cause i've submitted some really 5 minute crap, and im still and artist in the making, but these are tips that might help out part two. So take these points into consideration. ***Please get back to me on the sound stuff eh thanks alot** And good luck with the next one.