Meh...
I had a hard enough time sitting through the adds at the beginning of the flash, minutes upon minutes of the same old SWIII jokes bordered on soporific.
While some of the lines made me chuckle, the voice acting was immediately annoying and the cutout animation soon followed in its stead.
Hopefully the second half will speed up a bit.
Oog.
There was once a time when Star Wars parodies were clever, and not just some decent voice acting and animation. I don't mean to hark on you so hard, but this was trite and derivative of so many other things. Obviously you are, along with everyone else, well acquainted with Monty Python. You understand Star Wars pop culture well enough to pull out one-liners like 'I have a bad feeling about this', and you've got a penchant for humorizing character designs. But, other than that, the jokes are stale and ill-prepared, the script is something of a trite jab, and slapstick moments aren't nearly clever enough to hold up their own lofty weight. I'd like to see you do something a bit more you, more of your making. You've got a good sense of style, a decent talent for voice-recording, and a good stable of animation skills. Put them to work doing something better than just another bad parody.
This is probably the only GOOD negative review I got.
Thanks, man.
the guy before me is right
are any of the jokes yours? i mean monty python and the holy grail is awsome dont steal any jokes from that.
my teeth fell out from watching this
The graphics are really boring and lame, except for the faces, those were well drawn. The jokes weren't funny and overall I didn't like this spoof much at all. Sorry.
VASTLY lacking in humor
Well the graphics and style were sort of South Park-esque as the characters looked as if they were made from construction paper (and the shadows looked as if they were always put on a flat background which just added to the south park feel), which to tell the truth I don't really mind, as I quite like south park and you DID attempt to make it your own.
The jokes were all things heard a million times before so they didn't even make me crack a smile, that INCLUDES the Black Knight sketch from Monty Pythons "King Authur and the Holy Grail", it was originally a brilliantly funny sketch but it just lost so much in this that I really don't think I would be able to think of it as funny ever again.
There wasn't really even a hint of originallity in it so I had to mark it really low.
Basically you've really got to work on the script ok?