Slowly...
I believe your animation was a bit too slow. Humor was a bit weak, but it was fine. Try not to make things too monotoneus. Try making more scenes with more fun. That would be nice...
Reviews for "mario parody pt2"
Alright, since you asked...
...not bad, not bad at all. In general, this was about average, but i'll give you some tips on how to improve. Firstly, change up the music a bit. That overworld theme began to get monotonous after a while. Switch to either underground, underwater, or castle settings ever once in a while to mix things up a bit. Secondly, make some of your tweens not as lengthy - the skit with Luigi stealing Mario's hat was the worst offender (it took Mario far too long to reach his brother). Besides those two matters, the movie was pretty good. Your skits were decent - my favorite was the one mentioned above. Anyway, good job. You definitely have it in you, and with a few tweeks, your score might be higher than you'd ever imagine. Good luck in the future Camron :D
Camron23 responds:
Alright, i'll see that gets fixed.
Thanks for the info.
Meh...
First off, meh, good, but not great.
Secondly, don't use words if you don't know what they mean, cause that was kind of unrelated to dislexia...
Finally, man, upgrade to 16-bit sprites, they look so much better...
Camron23 responds:
Nah...
chill...
I could make one of em, but people use
them way too much.
oh and Mario was dyslexic, so he wasent
able to read the sign.
oh my ribs
that was b-e-a-UTIFUL!
Camron23 responds:
Thanks,
and welcome to NG
FUN-E
i love it, the luigi sence was funney!
Camron23 responds:
Thanks.
I try.