Its a start
Touches on some issues dealing with creativity. I think you touched on a dicey topic, but you forgot to mention something. Art is about expression. Everyone expresses themselves differently. Good artists, excellent artists, really don't care much for the opinions of others. They do some, yes, but its not important when your studying and trying to externalise ideas/feelings. I make my own music, I really don't care if anyone else likes it. I do. The two fellows in your animation would have been a lot better off if they were expressing themselves for introspection rather than making a few extra bucks. Besides, being considered a good artist by the public has much more to do with popularity.