dry humor
your delivery time for the punchline was apualing
Reviews for "Twist of Fate"
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But it was sent...
...first class?
Another Lokken masterpiece!
Another Lokken masterpiece full of humor and irony. Thank God for jeremy! Great job man.
`Iron_Fries
Funny
This was really funny, lol! You have your own very very nice style. Try to emprove on your graphics though.
Pretty good for 48 hours of work
I'm mad I didn't get to go down and see this Downtown. I hope you did well there. The flash was a little confusing and I'm not sure the second part was ironic. The velvet line, though it had to be in it, was weird. Anyway, congrats, Mr. Lokken. I hope I get to see your next public showing of one of your shorts.
I concur with my fellow reviewers; Not bad.
A few nice touches, pretty funny. Good work over all. Hope to see more.