It was good...for a sprite flash.
I thought the effects were very well done. However, the conversations I felt could use some help, with both content and grammar. Next time maybe run a spell and grammar check to get the last minute typos out.
My biggest problem was the background. I like the forced distance perspective when they were hit off into the distance. But even a poorly drawn one would've been better than that eye sore of a grassy plain sprite one.
And I think the gay sex part was a little uncalled for. I didn't think it added much.
But all in all a decent sprite movie.