Reviews for 10 ways Mario can die

[Bigfoot3290]

Not Funny.

Just about all of these skits have been done before. Especially Mario being impaled by the flag pole. I sware, I've seen that happen about two dozen times over the years. However, you animated the sprites fairly nicely. Still, the objects you drew were godawful. The blood was too thick - use a smaller brush size next time. The fire wasn't fluent enough - 2 frames? Next time, aim for five or six. Luigi's gun and the toads' pickaxes were also abysmal. Add some shading and don't use the line tool as much. The fact that you can animate sprites tells me that you have potential, just brush up on your comedy and spend some more time drawing the blood, etc.

DrClay responds:

Watch my other flashes and you will be surprised how i have improved. ^^

Thanks for the review
Good luck with your stuff

[blahblah5428]

Well...

The movie is just kind of... bland. Instead of making a long movie, next time, make a shorter movie with more concentration. You could do it.

DrClay responds:

Thank you. Your a very nice person.

Thanks for the review
and good luck with your stuff.

[DSRPS2]

yeah, suppose its ok

well its a good idea since mario should die, but why use those older sprites and it was way too predictable

DrClay responds:

i liked the older sprites.
plus the one where he doesnt go into the castle and goes off screen is a tribute to the little glitch and code of being able to jump over the flag pole. except he doesnt die in blackness. but yeah I just liked the older game better.

Thanks for the Review
Good luck with your stuff

[KillerPooMuffin]

Ok.

Well the concept was a good idea but it was to predictable.... for example instead of having mario die when he was jumping for a flag do something More random like when he was about to jump when it counts to 2 or something have a Bus hit him or something... i either thought he was gunna get imapled or he was gunna miss the flag.... 1 of them came true... well ne way u should make another 1 But make it something the causal person wouldnt be able to think of

[UKBBfan]

Lame

Like the proverbrial duck. Nothing original and with very few of your own graphics - and those that were, were rushed and horrid. The whole idea needs thinking through a whole lot more - and a lot more time taken on it.

DrClay responds:

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