It was ok
I think this was ok but not very good. Why does everybody feel the need to make fun of mario. It is good animation and all but you need to work on your creativity. You don't need to do a cartoon about mario because everybody else is. When I look in the flash portal I see like six other mario things and it pisses me off. It isn't very funny.
BigB
Mario Cant Die Like This It Impossible
your point?
Ok.
Well the concept was a good idea but it was to predictable.... for example instead of having mario die when he was jumping for a flag do something More random like when he was about to jump when it counts to 2 or something have a Bus hit him or something... i either thought he was gunna get imapled or he was gunna miss the flag.... 1 of them came true... well ne way u should make another 1 But make it something the causal person wouldnt be able to think of
Not Funny.
Just about all of these skits have been done before. Especially Mario being impaled by the flag pole. I sware, I've seen that happen about two dozen times over the years. However, you animated the sprites fairly nicely. Still, the objects you drew were godawful. The blood was too thick - use a smaller brush size next time. The fire wasn't fluent enough - 2 frames? Next time, aim for five or six. Luigi's gun and the toads' pickaxes were also abysmal. Add some shading and don't use the line tool as much. The fact that you can animate sprites tells me that you have potential, just brush up on your comedy and spend some more time drawing the blood, etc.
Watch my other flashes and you will be surprised how i have improved. ^^
Thanks for the review
Good luck with your stuff
Not that Bad.
I acctuly expected a much worse movie but I found this one quite enjoyable. your on the right path to improvement, keep att it! :)