Nice try!
I thought it was really good. The music that got looped over and over again got a wee bit annoying after a while. But the idea of the flash was amazing. Loved the sound effects you used, and I thought it was good how the text boxes didn't appear for too long. Good job!
I some cases i thought i didnt leave enough time for the boxes, maybe it just me.
Some potential there.
Yes, I could definitely see myself enjoying some of your future works. But not this one, unfortunately. This sort of story has been done so many times it's raised the bar far above what you've presented here. Not a bad first effort, but you're going to need to work a lot harder to make this series noteworthy.
Yeah your right it, dosnt make much sence. although i think im going to redo lots of this one, and with the next one coming along, its should be better of a storyline.
Don't listen to mr bobo64
Hey i liked it even if this was your frist one it rocked so don't feel bad and the reson for giving 8 for sound its cause u tried your best on the muisc.
The music will get better, im going to put more effort into it. before i just wanted to get the project done, now im going to go back and add better audio
Pretty good for a first try
But I do think you need to work on a plotline for this. As the former commentatornoted, there was not really a lot of sense made, but it did display that your control over the graphic aspects of this was incredibly good. Other than making a true plot, I think you have great potential.
wow, that was really bad
That made no sense. We didn't get to see what happened to Mario and we don't know who that Dark Mario is or why he attacked Bowser. I can also see that you tried to sound dramatic and cool with the whole "Then I have no use for you," but we've all heard it before, so that was just annoying. And how can a coin be poisoned -- its not like Mario eats them. Oh, and the credits scroll the wrong way at the end.
Well you do relize this was my first time attempting this, and i dont see you with any flash uploads, so you really would know how dificult it is to make a flash project when your still learning... Although i didnt exspect this to be my best work, or even for anyone to like it. my work will improve though so keep an eye out to see my improvments.