Good job.
It was touching..blah blah blah...too bad it so cliche. lol
Good none the less.
Reviews for "Her and Mine 1001 Wishes"
This is..Wow
This Story is extremely good...Very touching ... Hope to see more from you in the future =) (P.S - I can't really hear the song even if i put my sound to the max =X)
That was excellent
That was an excellent flash movie. Great story., and the music fit the story perfectly. I enjoyed this one alot, definitely on my favorites list.
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Holy hell.
Damn that was a long one. Though it was indeed good, except for the way the people looked. What was with the dark red that covered some spots of their body? I mean, I know it was meant to be skin tone..but it really just looked like they were sun burnt. Keep practicing..
Hm and hum...
There are good and bad things about this submission...
Firstly, on a neutral note, is that Hawaiian? Doesn't sound Japanese to me, but I wouldn't know one hundred percent. Still, I heard some words that certainly sounded more Hawaiian than Japanese. Also, what is the name of the song?
Also neutral note, but I noticed that the words didn't match up with the "lyrics" too well... is this an issue with translation, or because the words are just a backstory and the song is to set the mood?
Who wrote the song? Again, I'd like some information about the song for enlightenment.
And now for the review.
(Graphics) I liked the drawing style (anime!) used, and I have no real beefs with the artwork. The drawings could have used a little more fluidity and texture... and also, why did they look sunburned so often? If that was supposed to be a blush, why wasn't it on both cheeks? And if it isn't a blush, what is it?
(Style) Very high quality, I've never heard of a wish book so I gave it points for that. However, I found the ending very detracting from the story. The story leads us down the road of hope, and ends on a hopeful note... this doesn't, in my opinion, constitute an ending, persay, but just a stop in the narration. An ending would be finding out what she truly had wished for her 1001st wish, or something more personal and traumatic happening (for example, her leaving before he found out her wish), so on and so forth. By ending on that "and that, I think, is her 1001st wish as well" line, you don't conclude the generally happy feelings that flooded me throughout the story.
(Sound) Like I said, at times, the story didn't match the music, and I can't find out, for the life of me, what language it is in. At least, I think, you should put a short summary of the song at the end, telling what the song's name is, who sings it, refining the plot, etc. etc.
(Violence) The whole beating the other guy up doesn't really match the character I thought the main guy was. Getting slapped worked out well, though. =)
(Interactivity) If I had the song, I'd sing along? (hopeful)
(Humor) There are many funny things occuring, I'll leave them to the future generation to find out what I refer to.
(Overall) A good, strong story guaranteed to pull on your heart. Doesn't have the same strength in its resolution, but the song, for the most part, keeps you in the proper mood. Good story, fully worthy of 4/5 stars.