pretty decent
yeah, it was on ok flash dude, not bad if your a beginner.. (i cant talk, iv neva even SEEN the flash creating program thingy, lol) but yeah, nice job, but you need a bit more sound. the starting scene could have used the uberly awesome super mario theme. Oh, and watch ur grammar too. Try to make future flash movies longer too, dont ruch em, take time to perfect em. it doesnt matter if it takes u a month or 2, just so long as ur happy with it. other than that, good job man! ill be lookin for any future submissions of urs to see how they improve! *thumbs up*