Confusing.
So, there are many nice aspects: the wierdness, the mood that you create, and the visuals all stand out.
But the plot is full of gaps that make the story difficult to follow. That's kind of nice because it leaves mystery, but that is ruined by the ending, which does not have that same openness. Also what was the purpose of the male character?
Please clean up the sound.
Overall very good. Hope to see more!
In all honesty...
The ending was very creepy. And iv'e been playing Exmortis all day. Your right about the voice's needing work. The character's seemed a bit stiff too. Not bad for a first submission though.
Good but one problem
My only problem with this animation was the voice acting, both characters needed stronger voices. It may have been the mic but I'm still not sure that would've helped. The girl should've had a clearer voice and should have been most likely softish and a whole lot more feminine. The Aunt on the other hand also needed a more feminine voice as well as the sound of one who has aged badly if you know what I mean. Other than that it was excellent.
This ist the best ever...
nice graphics but there was no point and the sound sucks. next time make something better k?
what my ending would be.
at the end I would of grabbed the old lady by the shirt and started pummiling her saying "I was ahead of you by 5 steps if not 50!" and then I would have ran away from the cop's lol.
It is good work but the frame rate could use some work.