Reviews for L's got Raito Whipped

[kunoichi8]

Wheeee!!! I'm nakid!!!

That line made me crack up, and the fact that it was spelled wrong was funny as well.

Pros: Good humor, not vulgar, nice drawings, L was almost naked(xD), Raito got hit with a baseball bat, and the complaints screen was funny.

Cons: Music was a little choppy, and of course(just like everyone else is saying, and I know you've explained, forgive me...) there wasn't a lot of actual movement.

Basically, good work, pretty funny, reminds me of the great Go-Devil-Dante's work(bows to her goddess).

[deadandgone]

Haha, lights such a snob XD

I love this! I saw it on DA but my account isn't working *sniffle*. Great graphics, good soung plus it's hilarious. I love the fangirls in vent ^_^ *pokes raito* oh, and before I forget, congrats on winning the Hella-toes (I think it was) contest! Great job! *is happy*

[IceDragon64]

borderline protect

Its not my taste at all, but I realise that it is reasonable stuff. I didn't uderstand a lot of it, but hey thats just me and you did give us very clear warnings about the content.

It would be much better with voice acting, as you know.

I liked the warning at the beginning, but the spelling was terrible.
I know I am an old fuddy but there are others like me and we do vote, so please after all that time taken to create, get someone to go through and check the spelling:
in the Warning:
randomness, subliminal, squirrel, suitable

After the Warning:
portrayal.

dancer4ever responds:

Thanks,

I'll make the corrections now. *can't spell to save her life*

[C-Hawk]

Good work

It's got class: nothing was exagerated, you controlled yourself well. I really can't see much to improve on, except maybe a bit of music coordination, i thought i heard some of it overlapping. Keep it up!

[Seanjay]

lmfao

Also, it's Yagami Raito not Ratio, he is not a math problem : )
Im a huge fan of deathnote, that helped me in clicking this.
Make more please. NOW.

dancer4ever responds:

Haha, well just shows how much japanese I know (zelch).

Thanks!