very nice
a very nice rpg. i like the game play and the story so far. though it was rather short. i think you should try to fit in more per chapter or something. also the reactions were really quick . . a lil too quick. i suggest giving a lil more time or some sort of timer . . . like a line on a bar and u have to hit a,s, or d when it hits a certain area on the bar. i did notice your exlamation points but they were just brief flashes. im not saying a very long time but like a half a second should be enough time.