It's alright
But I feel it's got a lot of room for improvement if you give it the time. It sounds too monotonous. I understand that the whole purpose of the original was to be monotonous, but as a remix I feel a lot more could be added to it to improve on the original.
I can see that, yeah. I did consider doing a huge overhaul for it (I still may) but i find the original melody to be so damn catchy! thanks for the review.
who cares about being late : )
great job, nice beat and nice use of the melody.
But i need to ask how you made the sweep that starts at 1:09.
I have tried to replicate that sort of thing, but it never seems to work
Anyways, great piece. 10/10
Open a 3xosc (im assuming you're using FL here) and change the main osc to a noise wave and turn the others down. click the INS tab, then the CUT under that. turn the AMT all the way up and change the filter to a BP. modX goes all the way down, and modY goes all the way up. adjust the attack and decay as you see fit (more att=positive sweep, no attack but more decay = negative sweep). hope i made this clear and helped a bro out!
EDIT: slap an EQ and delay on there to make it sound totes better.