jesus f***king christ dude,
that was the most horrifically creepiest thing i have ever seen sense i saw Rob Zombie's "House of a Thousand Corpses". there was a point half in the video where i actually felt a strong shiver coarse through my arms making the hairs on my arms stand up on end. if this was your first attempt at MX flash, then jesus, it was good.
i read your post, and yes, i hope your future projects get the same response to. keep up the good work, and maybe watch that rob zombie movie for a bit of inspiration if you're gonna keep making creepy short stories.
i especially liked how you started off by describing the setting through the bug's point of view, a classic horror movie element i see used time to time.
10 stars, voted 5, loved it, and i'm DYING to see more!