radioactive chicken murder...LOFMAO!!! -on with the story- the cat nammed mittins #imagens fluffy white cat#...AWWWWWWWWW!!! -on with the storry- house wipping its hair #hears sisters abnoctius singing#... WTF -on with the story- "walk down the walkway" instead try 'up the path'; 'treack to the house'; traveled twordes the house' these are some suggestions to help keep your writting from being confusing, repetitive, or just plane boring :):) -on with the story- really fat guy...#santa clause#...ROTFL -on with the story- very deep and dangeruse... GERONIMO!!!!!!!!!!!!! -on with the story- 2 seconds later. . . HOLY CR*P I GET A CHOSE!!!!!!!! :> . . . .!!!!!MEDAL GET!!!!! H*LL YEA!!!!!!!! -trying again- cant use a weapon. . . maby not legaly but i CAN and WILL physicaly :>:>:> -on with the story- arresten for murder. . . ROTFL wouldent be the first time!!! -on with the story- demonic ritual. . . HOLY CR*P I SHOLD CALL ALEX AND ASK IF IT WAS HIM!!!!! -on with the story- smells better. . .LOFMAO -on with the story- lifts statue. . .glowing chicken HOLY CRAP I WAS JUST WONDERING IF YOU MADE SOMETHIN ON THEM~WAIT WHY ARE YOU PEACKING ME NO NO OH GOD NO!!!!!!!!!!#dead# -trying again- Geriatric Skeletor... ???????? eh whatever - on with the story- mittens will never beleive me...WTF does this guy have no friends!!! any way on more ending and ill finnish the review:) -trying again(LAST TIME)- mitterns will never love me again...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY MITTENS!WHYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TT^TT -on with the story- christmas past... demonds!!. . .VIKINGS...EVIL SMURFS!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOOOOO T^T my child hood -onwards- new papa smurf. . .CRAZY SMURF LORD!!!!! HOLY MOTHER F*CKING CR*P!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE END OF THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!! -onward- #dead#....
that was mind blowing. . .the way you write is amazing you do what few people even relize: you wrote it in a way that quite litteraly shows the human thought prosess. which is: random images memorys thoughts emotion all wering about a million miles a secont. when things are written this way people get convused because they assume that there own thoughts are orderally and that every one elseas thoughts are; in all acualety its the opeset which is also shown in my above writting, i wrotte what i thought as i thought it. this is difficalt because most of our thoughta arent in the words that we use to comunicat so i did my best.
keep writing like this thoughs who understand it are on your level of intelledgents and are worth talking to; if they dont get it dont wast your time explaning it to them. IF they put the effort into figuring it out THEN there worth your time effort and stress,if they dont its there life.
to SomeGuy1294 shut the f*ck up you clearly dont understand even the most basic of human nature and therefor cant understand your OWN MIND let alone anothers!! so when you can PERFECTLY DESCRIBE AND UNDERSTAND humans thought prosses, emotions, and induvidualety THEN you can tell others they dont get it!!!
