Good job~!
I couldn't find a single fault in this game. The actions and dialogue of most characters were so unlikely to be done and said in reality that it just made me crack up ("Didn't I tell you all to stop disappearing?!" <<<--- priceless line XD). The storyline itself was also really well-made, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I liked how most things wasn't the old "OMG theres a rock blocking my way, I must find a way to smash it because apparently I can not go around it like a normal person" type of game.
Really well made, you should really be proud of yourself, really! 10/10, you really deserve something higher though =3
Really looking forward to part 2