im struggling...
I can understand this as a emotional piece of work. I just feel that it didnt have to be made into a game surely it would of been easier to just made it into a flash animation?? then you could of created a longer maybe more in depth story that could build up emotions. I felt that it was abit point less with the old man dying and also just walking of a cliff at the end. It just didnt build me up to feel sorry for Walter. Maybe spend more time thinking about a story for this guy and re create it as a animation tell a story that can hit home with the audience.