Great Job
The parts I like the most are the sad buildup and the Slided melo (1 min to 1 min 10 sec) who's very impressive but also very under-rated.. the beats are quite ugly imo and the whole thing is way too fast.. But Damn man you've got skills! but I don't think people who doesn't understand techno can like this (wouldn't make a world hit). You'd probably have more luck making some rap beats rofl (now when anyone will tell me that rap beats are incredible I will show them this song ;) ).