Add cliches!
'The winner - it is you!' Love to see that...
Furthermore, after getting killed in the shooting (add healthpacks you can use in battles; pick up and use 'em later) you go to the boss.
Do hope there was no other level after the shooting BUT that boss, otherwise, crank health to it, cuzz the UZI was a bitch.
Overal, a great FLASH!, with good music, PWP, and a good sense of humor!
Keep it up!