Beautiful & Divine
Almost flawless from a technical point of view, no obvious lacking whatsoever throughout the length of the piece. Really, this particular submission is a notch above your other work, it not only has all the elements needed for a good song, but also possess that special something that makes certain works simply magnificent.
What I liked in particular was the theme you chose for this piece - Even by itself, the motif is quite beautiful. Various repetitions did not dull this theme, and the added variety, with each reiteration, makes the entire song that much more divine.