Nice but
there is a typo/english mistake. He says "This was all i ever wanted" but then says "Was to light a fag". He should say "To light a fag" OR combine the two sentences to make "This was all i ever wanted, to light a fag and end the pain." which i think sounds best. Him saying "was" twice is clumsy and doesn't make sense. I like the art though, nice red city contrasting with the dark colors and the light snow. I like the panel placement as-well, everything flows nicely when you read it. Good luck with pg 2!
