I think that the position you drew the arms makes them look limp
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"You may fight me whatever way you like - but no matter how, I will still crush you!"
Naril is one of my OCs and the third main character of a novel I am currently working on being introduced. A 'Brotherhood of the Final Day' priestess sent out by the Grand Master to assist Maneva on her mission. Aware of her vast abilities, she is extremely cocky, usually appearing invulnerable in combat, but getting her ass handed to her more often than not, when her ego overcomes her once more. Her knowledge regarding the world is encompassing.
Profile
Name: Naril
Nickname: Blood Knight (by Maneva/Aleyessa), Wheyfu (by Aleyessa)
Race: Human (Lumenian Imperial)
Gender: Female
Birthday: 1594-09-04-01 (Age 23)
Height: 169 cm
Weight: 74 kg
Complexion: Pale
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Teal
Personality
Dere: Tsundere (default: Tsuntsun)
Oni: n/a
Temperament: Choleric
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Traits and Equipment
Handedness: Ambidextrous
Primary weapons: Battlestaves, Claws
Secondary weapons: None, but is adept in martial arts
Armour: Usually wearing a Gi, but she could wear light armour
Accessories: Metal gadgets covering her wrists and hands, having spell focus lenses inserted in her palm or can be used to extract three bladed claws
Anima: Light (including Solar overcharge), Shadow (including Lunar overcharge)
Source of Anima: Raw
Elemental Affinity: Air
Divine Blessing: Flow of Life - as long as her Anima isn't exhausted or sealed, all damage taken is redirected to it instead
Other Skills: Flash Steps, Ancient Runes, Ancient Lore, Parkour, Ukemi
Combat Ratings
Melee (Unarmed + Armed): 8 + 7
Ranged: n/a (Naril won't ever bother using a ranged weapon)
Magical (Potency + Style): 4 + 6
Defence (Avoidance + Deflection + Endurance): 7 + 4 + 4
Speed: 10
Total Rating: 50
I think that the position you drew the arms makes them look limp
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