fail
you have some good details but you do a terrible job of capturing action and projecting what is happening. It look like the guy is simply floating in the air, rather than bursting through the window. Try again
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Thing Thing Scene:Invasion Lab
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What!?
From what I can tell you have one character busting through a window and shooting another. OK, fine, but this is pretty boring.
You need to work on dynamics and physics.
The First Madness Character doesn't even look like jumped through the window.... or even jumping....
Look up some action scenes from movies and other animations and study them.
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