Bonkers composition, having one of the closer elfs be closer to the camera can create an even greater tension and stronger sell the perspective

Awesome drawing. I love your color blending it adds depth to your piece. You have an eye for detail which is shown at the two gentlemen in the background. The only nitpick I have are the two elfs in the foreground. They seem to blend in to well so they don't stand out and they're missing some detail compared to the rest of the drawing. But besides, it's a beautiful drawing. Keep it up!