Nicely done.

My only criticism is that her breasts appear to be a bit low.
Still normal for a human, but a tad low.

Awesome

What really pulled me in was the color. I also agree with your auther comment on Raunchy's review. Art is in the eye of the beholder. So chill out, yo :)

Alright im not like

Alright im not like you guys below but i just look at these pics to work on my drawing Bbut i really like how u set the background and theme I also feel myself in the pic and i love how u can see her nipple outlines really realistic (for a cartoon 5/5 11/10

Good

For only using colors this is fairly good. however on a stylistic view, her apperal makes no sense. The top looks like a bathing suit, but then it spreads into a miniskirt, with a seemingly seperate rest of the bottom. Also, the breasts are to far apart, and the left hand is to big. Good execution, a few design mistakes.

Cool

The style it was drawn is good, even though you didn't used outlines and such, for me it is what call more the attention