Her big wild Afro hair, Stern look and body position makes Tally look just as amazing as her description. The eyes says she is sharp witted. The clenched fists says she's either ready to fight or do something crazy. And I bet she looks sexy being nude too. She got a nice chest bust.

The other commenter. XwaynecoltX. Might be too critical about the background. The focus here is on the character, not the background.

Nice charchter

Now here was a nice charchter the size could be taller but the yellow background needs some work some type of meshed out mixture of texture would be key but something more then just the yellowish backing just feels like it needs more it's a nice piece though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Yellow background needs more meshed texture

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