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A poster for a school project. If you're reading this, I would highly appreciate if you could answer in the comment the following questions:


1. What do you see in this image?


2. What do you recommend I do to make this image better?


Thank you

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i see a feamle soldier/superhero/someone bad ass, falling or being pushed, and her arm muscles. to make it better, i'd recommend to push the contrast a biiiit more. and the hair is a bit feathery. otherwise i like it. the colors are pretty awesome.

I left my critique on the thread that you want the critique on.

But Overall: I think color need work, and set up for the composition.

BITCH BE FALLING TO HER DEATH YO!

Awesome work, such lovely texture on her body suit thing, really nice.

Proportions look pretty decent and I like the way you've forshortened shizzle. Perspective work is done really well here man, g'job.

Simply amazing!

I was writing a review earlier, but newgrounds had some server issues and it was erased when I submitted it, so this may be more brief than I intended.

1. Futuristic athlete, high tech special agent, or maybe a superhero.
2. On the lower half of her body, the lines of her suit don't look as symmetric as they should, also assuming what she's wearing is a some sort of tight rubbery suit, then there should be some wrinkles here or there (reference some pictures of latex/rubber catsuits... hmm). Also, unless she's a superhero, maybe you could give her some tactical gear, like a small vest and belt with a combat knife/pistol, and add plenty of sexy straps. Also I think her visor/goggles could be more reflective, and the white glow behind her seems a bit unnecessary.

Keep up the good work, and keep improving! :)

Blud-Shot responds:

Thanks BigCman, I appreciate the feedback. I'm gonna make the adjustments.

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