It's great but theres a certain hardness that the dbz chars have. I think your line smoothing might be too high. Almost all the lines in dbz are angled and sharp except for the orginal dragonball where they had more curved lines on their characters.

Your shading skill is amazing srsly. I wish I could do that

Watch him go blonde. The dude gets real buff, doesn`t he?
You did an awesome job, the whole series could have been based off of this.

That's a pretty good vegeta. You just chose a bit of a light colour palette for vegeta, but it's still decently accurate to Akira Toriyama's original concept for Vegeta.

You seem better handled with Shonen characters than you are with realistic ones.

From looking at this simple drawing of Vegeta I can already tell you have a good chance at doing some decent Shonen styled web-comics.
I know you did one all by yourself, I read it. And no offence, man, but it was pretty horrible.
The dialogue was atrocious, the characters were one-dimensional, the story was a stupid idea to begin with, and it was all one, spectacular mess.

This is why the next web-comic you do has to have another guy on board, a writer.

Anyways, a good drawing with pretty alright lighting.

Oh my God, it's Goku! :D

if you haven't seen the video sexualobster did for Vegeta you need to see it