I really love the concept of this Spiderman. The body horror bits have your distinct touch added to them, and I like that. The stuff that happens to him is pretty creative as well. The wit in the narration is just like Spiderman. That first panel looks really cool with the thing drilling into his hand. I think you could have gone just a little further with the costume, added more creepy stuff. The panel where he's wearing the costume with his hand morphing seems low-detail and I guess like the linework isn't very good. Overall a cool idea but could have been a little better in some places. Guess you put most of your effort into the body horror lol.