I find the concept of a tentacle between the two people interesting. From the way it looks I get the idea this collection will be about someone who suffers from having a split personality trying to control their life.

The basic black background is nice.

Then the red squiggly lines make me think that the red half of the people will be pulling at strings to see to it that things they want get done.

The people, one happy, the other looking angry is another good concept. The circles with a cross, girl, and the teeth in a mouth make it slightly confusing to understand what might be getting ready to happen.

Overall, very interesting. Looking forward to it.

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It looks quite cool. At first I thought the image of the character was just mirrored, but then I noticed some minor details are different between the left and the right half.

Also, the background is very good. I like, how you notice more and more stuff the longer you look at it. Some of those lines seem to be pretty random at first, but then after a while you notice a pattern... and then, there's suddendly something you didn't even saw before. Very cool stuff.

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I think it looks cool, even if it is a tad simplistic. I'd give you full credit, but it looks like you just copied the layer, reversed it then put it together.