If you sent this shit to the actors they'd laugh their fuckign asses off. You're a god damned grown man, draw like one. This literally looks like some grade-schooler fan-girl drew it up in an hour.
I don't even know where to begin. How about with blondie in the middle looking like a severed octopus head floating eerily in the background?
Their hair looks like scraggly lines. Their noses are garbage, you can't even draw a straight one. Btw, don't think I didn't notice you purposely avoided drawing ears because you find them hard.
Your mouths are even fucking worse. Bilbo's looks like a fucking black hole. TEETH AND LIPS ARE THINGS YOU SACK OF SHIT! LEARN TO DRAW LIPS AND TEETH AND TONGUES.
The best part? Bilbo's neck and coat look better than anything you've drawn in your previous works. Look at how you did bilbo's neck and coat and try to keep at least that level of progress in all aspects of your works.